For a Revised Version

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For a Revised Version

Oh, deem it not presumption, Lord,

In me to revise Thy holy Word⁠—

No jot or tittle I’d efface,

No menace dire, nor pledge of grace.

No poetry I’d blot (although it’s

Well known to Thee that I hate poets),

But humbly, reverently try

Some missing mandates to supply.

For lo! I fall of dunces ill,

Who’ve got by heart Thy written will;

I turn, behold! in tears away

From rogues Thy bidding who obey.

Wherever “Thou shalt not” occurs

I’d add “Thou shalt the exact reverse,”

And many a virtue, too, compel

(By plain command and threat of hell)

Which has no corresponding vice

To interdict in terms precise.

Thus I’d exterminate the brood

Of rascals negatively good⁠—

Men Bible-clear, who ought to smart

Beneath the lash at tail of cart.

Each soul (masks, too, would then be thinner)

If not a saint, should be a sinner.

In error, Lord, if I am found,

Observe how clouds my vision bound:

Forgive my narrowness of sight,

And bless me with the larger light

In Thine imperfect law to trace

The perfect purpose of Thy grace.